Introduction
This is an analysis of the parts usually found in a Holders story. DO NOT take these as a "fill in the blank" set of directions for writing a Holder and it is NOT required to follow these guidelines. Some of the best stories deviate from these guidelines.
Keep these in mind as you write.
Alternatively, you could take a look at The Holder of Cliches - a shining example of what NOT to do.
The Most Important Thing
The most important thing is your writing style. Even if you have a great idea, if you can't communicate that idea effectively, your effort will be wasted and your writing will suck.
Make sure your writing doesn't suck. The Objects are a set of accursed items scattered across the world to prevent them from ever coming together, an event which may unleash untold horrors upon the cosmos.
Keep that in mind. They aren't like Pokemon - the goal is NOT to "catch 'em all" and acquire lots of superpowers.
These are dark, damned Objects, and their writing style ought to match. Run-on sentences, lack of punctuation, spelling errors, and the word "shall" do not make your writing scary or good.
Less-Important Things
Parts of a Holder
Avoiding Common Mistakes
Legion's Objects
(or "oh noes the 538 are all taken!"
Seeing as how the original 538 Objects all now have stories, naturally, the only place for new Holders stories to go is in Legion's Objects. If you're going to do this, however, please choose a number that has not been assigned a Holder yet.
To see a list of unassigned numbers and start working on your submission, click here. Try to avoid Holder names that already exist.
There Are ONLY 2538 Objects
Some think the best way they can contribute in an original way is to add "Actually, there's one more SECRET Object only I knew about!" to the mythos. This is FALSE. The number of Objects is set, and not to be screwed with. Adding an extra, secret Object is forbidden and unoriginal. It is no different than trying to create a fourth Triforce piece. Some things are best left alone.
Those Who Seek
Aside from spelling and grammar to watch out for there are other problems for Those Who Seek.
TL;DR
Too long, didn't read?
- Take a break after you write, then proofread.
- Don't grant the Seeker superpowered superpowers.
- Study the writing style of existing Holders, and read the Featured Stories.
- For Those Who Seek test your character for Mary Sue syndrome, don't give your character too many Objects, and make sure your answer is excellent before solving a mystery.
After You Write
- Type the story into the word processor of your choice.
- Run spell-check.
- Fix errors.
- Read your story aloud to yourself. Pause when you reach commas, check your punctuation, and fix sentence flow.
- It is at this juncture, and only at this juncture, that you should submit the story.
No one is above these steps. Always, always, always use them. You will save everyone a great deal of aggravation.
Conclusion
Now that you've read this, do NOT go and start writing, filling in each numbered section.
That is wrong.
Keep the guidelines in mind, but don't look at them while you write. I encourage you to change, omit, or add things as you see fit - this is but an analysis of what most of the Holders are like.
Keep in mind that Dargaia's Nectar (The Holder of the First Seed) and The Holder of Shadows are written in first-person; you're not limited to 3rd-person.